I believe that alot of my essays still need work. The one that needs the most work is my research paper. I am having difficulties organizing my essay and figuring out my focuses. My paper is about Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs and i want to focus on the concept of love and what it portrays to children when they watch it. I also am thinking about talking about the feminitity that Snow White portrays. I just need help figuring out my ideas. I think at the moment my personal anaylsis essay is the strongest, i just need to add a personal story to it have an exact moment to make it alot more stronger. For my close reading essay i just want to add more context to my paper. You have all read my papers so if you have any ideas or thoughts that would help me out so much!